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Band 4+: Describe an interesting place that you have been to with a friend

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I want to talk today about a beautiful place, Bhuvadirvar Park. It is a park, and it is very beautiful. When I go to my field, I travel to this park in Bangladesh. Bhuvadirvar Park is located in a famous district in Bangladesh. It is very beautiful, and many people visit it. Bhuvadirvar Park attracts many travelers. It is popular on international websites and TikTok, where you can find fun videos. I spent my free time there, and many people upload videos about this beautiful place. Bhuvadirvar Park is actually a wonderful spot to enjoy nature and relax with friends.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I want to talk about today a beautiful place, Bhuvadirvar park. It is a park, select park is the beautiful and when will I go to my field park, park park travel and and and Bangladesh beautiful Bangladesh countries, countries select is the famous district in park park Bhuvadirvar park. Bhuvadirvar park is very beautiful and people are the sun and people are the sun, many travel and many travel. So, Bhuvadirvar park is very beautiful and many travel and and and and and and and and and and and and international website and the TikTok and very fun video and and a popular celebrated and and a and I spent a free time I spend the people video and website upload so very beautiful actually

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

park: 6

beautiful: 4

bhuvadirvar: 4

many: 3

about: 2

place: 2

bangladesh: 2

people: 2

videos: 2

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Pronunciation

3.5

Your pronunciation needs significant improvement as it may hinder comprehension. Devote time to individual sounds and their combinations.

Task Response

5.5

The response is a good start, but it could be improved by adding more specific details and personal experiences. Consider describing specific features of the park, activities you and your friend did there, and what made the experience memorable. Elaborating on the reasons why it's interesting and beautiful would also strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer lacks fluency. There is excessive repetition and numerous instances of "and." The structure is disorganized. Work on improving the flow of your speech and reducing filler words. Practice speaking more naturally and connecting your ideas more smoothly. Try outlining your ideas before speaking to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is limited and repetitive. While the speaker mentions "international websites and TikTok," the overall range of vocabulary is insufficient for a higher band score. Focus on expanding your vocabulary related to describing places and experiences. Use more descriptive adjectives and avoid repetition. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical accuracy is inconsistent. There are numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect sentence structures and tense usage. The excessive use of "and" demonstrates a lack of grammatical range. Focus on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and different verb tenses.

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