Band 5+: Describe your favourite teacher from school. You should say: What school he/she taught at What he/she looked like What subject he/she taught you

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses all parts of the prompt, providing information about the school type, the subject taught, and the teacher's physical appearance. To improve the score, aim to expand on the descriptions to provide more depth. For example, instead of simply stating she was 'brilliant' or had 'magnificent features,' you could elaborate on how her teaching style affected you or provide more specific details about her appearance to create a more vivid picture. Additionally, while the answer is direct, adding more descriptive adjectives and complex sentence structures would enhance the natural flow of the response.

The speaker's response is quite fragmented. There is a significant logical contradiction at the beginning where the speaker says, 'I can't describe her,' but then proceeds to describe her. This affects the coherence of the answer. To improve, use better cohesive devices (e.g., 'Moving on to her appearance...' or 'In terms of her personality...') to link your ideas smoothly rather than using short, choppy sentences.

The vocabulary is quite basic and repetitive (e.g., using 'subject' and 'school' multiple times). While words like 'brilliant' and 'magnificent' are good attempts at higher-level vocabulary, they feel slightly forced in the context. Try to use more varied synonyms. Instead of 'She has math subject,' you could say 'She specialized in mathematics' or 'She was in charge of the math department.'

There are several grammatical errors, particularly regarding tense consistency. Since the teacher has left the school, you should consistently use the past tense (e.g., 'She taught' instead of 'She teaches', 'She was blonde' instead of 'She is blondie', 'She had' instead of 'she has'). Additionally, 'She has math subject' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'She taught mathematics.' Work on mastering the distinction between present and past tense when telling a story about the past.