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Band 6+: Do large media organizations have too much influence

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In this area of rapid technological development, I think media organizations show their dominance on almost all social networks. They exert a large influence on youngsters because their exposure to the internet is becoming more frequent, and with this, their exposure to improper content is also increasing. For example, my little cousins are allowed to use YouTube, and sometimes they use offensive words. They pick it up from YouTube when they are talking to each other.

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Is in this area of rapid technological development, I think media organizations show their dominance on almost all social networks. They exert a large influence on youngsters because their exposure to the internet is getting more frequent and with this their exposure to improper content is also increasing. For example, my little cousins are allowed to use YouTube so only that sometimes they use offensive words. They pick it up from YouTube when they are talking to a desk.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Vocabulary Repetition:

they: 4

their: 3

exposure: 2

youtube: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some insights into the influence of media. However, it mainly focuses on the negative impact on young people and lacks a broader discussion of the topic. Consider exploring both positive and negative influences, and providing more general examples rather than personal anecdotes to improve the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition and a slight stumble ("talking to a desk") detract from the overall fluency. Consider pausing briefly to gather your thoughts before speaking, which will improve the flow and reduce the need for self-correction.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly precise. Words like "dominance" and "exert a large influence" show good range. However, more sophisticated vocabulary could be used to discuss the nuances of media influence. Consider using synonyms for frequently used words to enhance lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence structure could be improved for clarity and impact. For example, the phrase 'with this their exposure to improper content is also increasing' could be restructured for better flow. Focus on using more complex grammatical structures, such as subordinate clauses, to demonstrate a wider range.

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