Part 3

Band 5+: Do people spend too much time using technology?

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

62% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

Actually, I totally agree with this view. Nowadays people spend too much time scrolling something on their mobile phones and also they can have their phone on the TV. The main reason is that people can find everything through a mobile phone, both necessary and unnecessary things. For example, according to Japan's research in 2020, 24% of people scrolling on mobile phones and using Bluetooth on their phones. Their main reason is that they can find information for homework on their mobile phones. However, it has a harmful effect on their mental health because it decreases attention span. It is so harmful for them to remember everything.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Actually, I totally agree in this view. Nowadays people spend too much time scrolling something, from their mobile phone and also they can have your phone on the TV. The main reason is that people can find everything through a mobile phone. So, much necessary things and also unnecessary things. For example, according to Japan’s research, the 2020, 24, 90 of the nature scrolling, mobile phones and the Bluetooth as a mobile phone. Their main reason is that they can find for make some home works as a mobile phone. However, it It is so harmful effect of their mental health because it’s a decreased attention span. It is so harmful for them to remember everything. And also it is…

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 43 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 6

mobile: 4

phones: 4

people: 3

scrolling: 2

phone: 2

reason: 2

everything: 2

harmful: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer stays on topic and addresses the question directly, agreeing that people spend too much time using technology. It provides a reason and an example, which is good. However, the response could be more fully developed and general in nature. The example about Japan's research is specific but not clearly explained or directly relevant to the main point. The answer also shifts to discussing personal effects on mental health, which is relevant but could be expanded. To improve, aim for a more balanced discussion that explores different perspectives, uses more general examples, and ensures each point is clearly linked to the question.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer shows some organization with an introduction, reason, example, and conclusion. However, there are noticeable hesitations, repetitions (e.g., 'It is so harmful'), and incomplete sentences (e.g., 'So, much necessary things and also unnecessary things'). The flow is disrupted by unclear phrasing and a lack of smooth transitions. To improve, practice using cohesive devices like 'furthermore' or 'consequently' and aim for more complete, connected ideas.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but limited and imprecise. Phrases like 'scrolling something' and 'nature scrolling' are unclear, and 'make some home works' is incorrect. There is some attempt at specific terms (e.g., 'attention span'), but overall flexibility is low. To improve, expand vocabulary for technology topics (e.g., 'browsing', 'addiction', 'digital devices') and practice using precise collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is inconsistent with errors in subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'people spend... scrolling something'), prepositions (e.g., 'agree in this view' should be 'agree with'), and article usage (e.g., 'a mobile phone' vs. 'their mobile phones'). There are also fragments (e.g., 'So, much necessary things...') and unclear structures. To improve, focus on basic sentence construction and practice using a mix of simple and complex sentences accurately.

Answers On The Same Topic:

Do people spend too much time using technology?

Generally speaking, in this day and age it is almost impossible to imagine our daily life without using technology. Firstly, we can’t do without it as everything now is connected with the internet and our devices. Secondly, technology is really everywhere and when we want to, for instance, when we want to buy something or […]

Band 6+

Do people spend too much time using technology?

Yes, they do. Most of people prefer to spend their time with digital devices instead of real persons. speaking, technology creates an ability to make life much easier. That’s the reason why people spend too much time with this. For example, for writing research, some students used to find in the work in the books […]

Band 5+

See All

Do teachers play videos in class in your country?

Yes, for sure. The majority of teachers in my country always strive for making videos in class to make the lesson more engaging and interesting for students, especially in the end of the weekend. They always create more creative handouts and leaflets that are written questions and that can encourage us to analyze our thoughts […]

Band 6+

Is it better for children to learn a second language at a young age or later in life?

I think there are wide range of reasons why it’s important to learn second language for children and early age. First of all, I believe that in the future it can cause strong employability in the job market for children. Because with the help of second languages, I think applying a high level of university […]

Band 6+

What are the positive points of reading newspapers?

Well, I believe that it has a profound and lasting impact on our overall lifestyle. For instance, nowadays the majority of newspapers, articles are quite informative and insightful as they offer clarifications regarding local and global events. As a result, the majority of people can broaden their horizons regarding the current events. Moreover, this activity […]

Band 7+

What are some potential drawbacks of relying heavily on social media for news and information?

Oh well, that’s an interesting and debatable kind of question. Well, I think it will be the main source for spreading false news across worldwide. And it will be the reason that people, of course, you know very well that now older people heavily rely on these social media apps and platforms and even Gen […]

Band 5+

When do young children start setting goals for themselves?

I see children begin setting simple goals when they start primary school, usually around age of 6 or 7. And at first their goals are quite small, simple, such as getting good grades, winning a sports competition or learning to ride a bicycle or maybe a car. As they grow older, especially during their teenage […]

Band 7+

Why is it important to set goals?

I think setting goals is very crucial because it helps people to stay focused and organized. When someone has specific targets, they can plan their time more effectively and they will know what they are aiming for. and goals also motivate people to overcome difficulties because they know what they’re working for, what they’re improving […]

Band 7+

See All

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium