Band 7+: Do the children watch too much tv

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The student provides a clear and relevant answer to the question, stating that children don't watch as much TV as they used to. They also give a reason for this, which is that children are more interested in video games. However, the answer could be more detailed and specific. For example, the student could mention specific types of TV shows that children are not interested in or provide examples of video games that children prefer.

The student speaks fluently with only a few minor hesitations. The answer is well-organized and easy to follow. The student uses some cohesive devices, such as "because" and "rather than." However, the answer could be more cohesive with the use of more varied linking words and phrases.

The student uses a range of vocabulary appropriate to the topic. They use words like "offsprings" and "encourage" which show a good level of vocabulary. However, the student could use more precise and sophisticated vocabulary. For example, instead of saying "not much interested in TV," the student could say "not as engaged with TV."

The student uses a range of grammatical structures accurately. They use complex sentences with subordinate clauses and use the present simple tense correctly. However, there are a few minor grammatical errors, such as the use of "was" instead of "are" in the phrase "offsprings was a lot of TV."