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Band 7+: Do women pay more attention to their health than men?

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Well, I don't believe so. In fact, nowadays both genders tend to stay focused on their overall well-being. For instance, currently the majority of women and men engage in sports activities, particularly in training centers. As a result, it encourages them to lead a well-balanced lifestyle and stay focused on their overall well-being. However, I suppose it is more preferable for women to stay focused on their overall well-being as they are physically not as resilient as men. However, I have encountered on social media platforms that the majority of athletes are men and women equally.

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Well, I don’t believe so. In fact, nowadays both genders tend to stay focused on their overall well-being. For instance, currently the majority of women and men engage in sport activities, particularly in training centers. As a result, it encourages them to lead a well-balanced lifestyle and stay focused on their overall well-being. However, I suppose it is more preferable for women to stay focused on their overall well-being as they are physically not resilient as well as men. However, I am able to encounter on social media platforms that the majority of athletes are men and women equally.

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focused: 3

their: 3

overall: 3

well-being: 3

women: 3

majority: 2

however: 2

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