Band 5+: Do you agree that clothes should be more expensive?

Your pronunciation is below average and may be understood with some effort. Pay attention to common phonemes that are challenging for you.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a clear opinion. However, it could be improved by elaborating on the reasons behind the opinion and exploring different perspectives. Consider discussing the economic and social implications of higher clothing prices, and perhaps acknowledging counterarguments. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. There is some repetition and slightly unclear phrasing. Try to use more sophisticated linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of simply stating two types of people, you could use a more nuanced approach, such as contrasting preferences or describing different occasions for wearing clothes.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Words like "dress and close up" are not quite right. Try to use more precise and sophisticated vocabulary to express your ideas. For example, instead of "dress and close up expensively," you could say "dress in expensive attire" or "favor high-end fashion." Consider using synonyms to avoid repetition.

There are some grammatical errors, particularly in the second sentence. The sentence structure is quite simple. Try to use more complex sentence structures, such as relative clauses or participial phrases, to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical accuracy. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles.