Band 6+: do you often use a computer

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is relevant and provides adequate information. To improve, consider expanding on the reasons why computers are important for homework and other tasks, and provide more specific examples.

The response is generally understandable, but there are some hesitations and repetitions ('watch drama, watch drama') that affect the flow. The ideas are connected, but the coherence could be improved by avoiding unnecessary repetition of phrases like 'other things' and 'very important'. Try to vary your sentence structure and use synonyms to avoid sounding repetitive.

The vocabulary is adequate for the topic, but it lacks precision and variety. The phrase 'other things' is vague and doesn't provide much information. To improve, try to use more specific vocabulary related to computer use and leisure activities. For example, instead of 'other things,' you could say 'research' or 'communication'. Also, consider using more descriptive adjectives and adverbs.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, 'homeworks' should be 'homework'. The sentence structure is simple and repetitive. To improve, try to use a wider range of grammatical structures, such as compound and complex sentences. Also, pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles.