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Band 6+: Do you think children get enough exercise these days

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In my opinion, in the 21st century, children can't get enough exercise because of technological development. Over the years, there have been many advancements in technology, like mobile phones. So, many children, after they go to school, are always on their phones and lying on their beds. As a result, most children in the world can't get enough exercise.

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In my opinion, in the 21st century, nothing can’t get enough exercise because it’s based on the technology development. Most of the these years, there are so many developments about technologies, like mobile phones. So, just in case a children after they go to school always is calling their phone and lying on their beds. So, most of the children in the world can’t get enough exercise.

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children: 3

can't: 2

enough: 2

exercise: 2

phones: 2

their: 2

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Task Response

The answer is quite good and addresses the question directly. Consider expanding on the reasons for lack of exercise and perhaps offering a contrasting perspective or suggesting solutions for improvement. More specific examples would strengthen the response.

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The answer is understandable, but the fluency could be improved. There is some repetition and the structure is a bit rambling. Try to organize your thoughts into a clearer, more concise structure with a stronger topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid unnecessary phrases like "in my opinion" as it is implied.

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Vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Words like "developments" and "calling their phone" are not quite the right fit. Consider using more specific and sophisticated vocabulary to describe the impact of technology on children's activity levels. For example, instead of "calling their phone," you could say "engrossed in their phones."

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