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Band 4+: Do you think children get enough exercise these days

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This is an example of a situation where children do not get enough exercise. The reason is that the risks can be quite normal. Many kids said that they don't engage in any physical activity. From my point of view, I strongly agree with this statement. The new technology and computer life, which are focused on social applications, are the main reasons why we don't get enough exercise these days, especially for some people's inactivity.

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This is an example of a thing that all children circuit not enough exercise. The reason why is that the risks can be also normal. The guys said that they don’t go to any exercise. In my point of view, I strongly agree with this statement. Because the new technology of computer life which is going to be for social applications and these are the main reasons why we don’t get any exercise these days. Especially with some people’s incompletion.

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exercise: 2

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The answer is partially relevant to the question but lacks a clear and well-developed discussion. It mentions lack of exercise but doesn't fully address the question in a general way. Consider structuring your response to directly address the prompt and provide a more comprehensive discussion of the issue, avoiding personal opinions and focusing on broader societal trends.

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