Band 5+: How dependent are people today on electricity?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer stays on topic and addresses the question directly, but it lacks depth and structure. It mentions dependence on electricity for internet and communication, but the reasoning is somewhat repetitive and includes an unclear point about government responsibility. To improve, provide a more balanced and general discussion, for example, by considering various aspects of daily life (e.g., work, healthcare, entertainment) and potential consequences of power outages. Also, aim for clearer organization and more precise vocabulary.

The answer is somewhat coherent but lacks clear organization. The main point (dependence on electricity) is stated, but the reasoning is muddled and repetitive. There is noticeable self-correction and hesitation ('It causes two causes and not only maybe a crisis'), and the link between citizens' anger and government responsibility is unclear. To improve, structure the answer with a clear introduction, supporting points (e.g., communication, daily activities), and a conclusion. Use cohesive devices like 'firstly', 'moreover', 'therefore' to guide the listener.

The vocabulary is adequate but limited and imprecise. Phrases like 'they matter and they carry about it' are awkward and unclear. There is some attempt at topic-specific vocabulary ('communication', 'network', 'social medias'), but it is not used with flexibility. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'reliant on', 'infrastructure', 'digital connectivity', 'essential services') and avoid vague expressions. Also, correct word forms ('social media' not 'social medias').

The grammar is mostly understandable but contains several errors. There are issues with subject-verb agreement ('their whole communication are built'), incorrect word forms ('It causes two causes'), and awkward phrasing ('they matter and they carry about it'). The sentence structure is repetitive and lacks complexity. To improve, practice using a range of structures (e.g., conditionals, relative clauses) and ensure accuracy with basic grammar rules. For example, 'If we don't have electricity, it causes...' could be rephrased as 'A lack of electricity would lead to...'