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Band 6+: • Do you think electronic equipment is better for communication than being face-to-face?

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Our lives in modern days have become busy and complicated. We barely get time to gather with friends and family. Because of advancements in technology, communication has become easier. We can communicate with each other through a mobile phone in a second. On the other hand, it also makes people lonely. They are able to communicate through electronic media, but in real life, they may have problems communicating. Advancement in communication is a boon as well as a curse.

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Our life in modern days have become busy and complicated. We barely get time to gather with friends and family. Because of advancement in technology, communication has been easier. We can really communicate with each other through a mobile phone in a second. On the other hand, it also makes people lonely. They are able to communicate through electronic media. But in real life, they will have a problem in communicating. Advancement in communication is a boon as well as a crush.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

become: 2

communication: 2

communicate: 2

other: 2

through: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer is on topic and attempts to address the question. However, it could be improved by focusing more directly on the comparison between electronic communication and face-to-face interaction. Consider providing more specific examples and exploring the advantages and disadvantages of both methods in a more balanced way. This would help to create a more comprehensive and insightful response.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is generally fluent and coherent, demonstrating a clear progression of ideas. However, the connection between the initial statement about busy lives and the discussion about electronic communication could be strengthened. Consider adding a sentence to explicitly link the two, such as, "This busyness has made electronic communication even more important."

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and generally appropriate for the topic. However, the use of "crush" at the end is incorrect. Replacing "crush" with "curse" would improve the lexical resource score. Consider using more sophisticated vocabulary to enhance your response, such as "impediment" or "double-edged sword" instead of "boon as well as a curse."

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are a few grammatical errors, such as subject-verb agreement ("life...have") and article usage. While these errors don't significantly hinder understanding, addressing them would improve the overall score. Pay attention to plural forms and articles. For example, 'Our lives' instead of 'Our life' and 'advancements' instead of 'advancement'.

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