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Band 5+: Do you think it is safe for children to use mobile phones without adult supervision?

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I believe that children are not safe when they use mobile gadgets without any adults nearby because they are complicated technologies that children cannot handle at their age. For instance, they can suddenly come across contacts that are not appropriate for their age, or they can download games that require additional payments. Without adult guidance, they can face serious problems with their financial situation. However, nowadays there are some...

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I believe that children are not safe when they use mobile gadgets without any adults nearby due to the fact that they are complicated technologies which children cannot go with at their age. For instance, they can suddenly come across contacts which is not based on their age category or they can download games that require additional payments and without adult guidance they can to serious problems with the financial situation. However nowadays they are some…

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children: 2

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Lexical Resource

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