Band 6+: Do you think it's important to have hobbies? Why or why not?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant information. To improve, consider elaborating on the benefits of hobbies and providing more specific details or examples related to your hobbies.

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are some pauses and hesitations that affect the flow. The ideas are presented, but the connection between them could be clearer. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. For example, you could say, 'Having hobbies is important because...' instead of just 'because...'

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. The phrase 'draft something, art maybe' is vague. Try to use more specific vocabulary related to your hobbies. For example, instead of 'draft something,' you could say 'technical drawing' or 'architectural sketching.' Also, vary your vocabulary to avoid repetition.

The grammatical range is limited, and there are some errors. 'It spends not a lot of time' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'they don't take up a lot of time.' Also, the sentence structure is simple. Try to use a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences, to improve your score. For example, 'Having hobbies is important because it allows you to...'.