Part 3

Band 6+: Do you think job will change near future?

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Well, I think it could change in the near future. I think it is changing now because there are many jobs that are being replaced by robots, particularly in the super mall. You can see that there are a lot of price finders. You can check the price before asking the salesman or staff what the price will be. Now it isn't needed. Automation is also being introduced in restaurants. Robots are serving the plates. So we need to change jobs in the future. A revolution is coming. People will lose their jobs, and robots will replace them. Thank you very much.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Well, I think it could be changed in the near future. I think it is changing from now because there are many jobs that are replaced by the robot, particularly in the super mall. Well, you can see that there are a lot of price finder. You can check the price before we ask the salesman or staff to what will be the price. Now it doesn’t need. So automation is also introduced in the restaurant. The robot is serving the plate. So we need to change the job in future. Revolution is coming. People will lose their job and robot will replace the people. Thank you very much.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Vocabulary Repetition:

jobs: 3

robots: 3

price: 3

will: 3

think: 2

change: 2

future: 2

there: 2

being: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some examples of how jobs are changing. However, it focuses heavily on the negative impacts of automation and lacks a broader perspective on the future of work. Consider exploring other aspects of job change, such as the creation of new jobs in emerging fields, the impact of technology on existing roles, and the need for reskilling and upskilling. A more balanced and nuanced discussion would strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There's a slight hesitation at the beginning ("Well, I think it could be changed..."), and a few minor instances of repetition and self-correction, but overall the ideas flow logically. Improving the pacing and reducing the number of fillers ("well") would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "automation" and "revolution" are used appropriately. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could be used to describe the impact of technological change on the job market. For example, instead of 'a lot of price finders,' you could say 'self-service price-checking kiosks'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. For example, the sentence "So we need to change the job in future" should be "So we need to adapt to changing jobs in the future." The use of the present continuous tense is inconsistent. More complex grammatical structures could be incorporated to demonstrate a wider range.

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