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Band 7+: do you think that all computer games should have a minimum age for players?

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Yes, I do. I believe it's extremely important, especially for young children. In fact, some games offer the possibility to insert parental controls to guarantee children's safety and reduce risks for them.

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Yes I do, I believe it’s extremely important especially for young children. In fact some games offer the possibility to insert parental control to guarantee children’s safety and reduce the risk for themselves.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:
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Pronunciation

7.5

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Task Response

5.5

The response is relevant to the question and provides a clear opinion. However, it lacks detailed explanation and supporting arguments to fully justify the viewpoint. Consider expanding on the potential negative impacts of unrestricted access to certain games and elaborating on the types of parental controls that could be implemented. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-structured. The speaker expresses their opinion clearly and concisely. Minor improvements could be made by slightly slowing down the pace to ensure even greater clarity and natural flow. The slight hesitation before "In fact" could be smoothed out.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and accurate. Words like "parental control" are used effectively. More sophisticated vocabulary could be incorporated to demonstrate a wider range, for example, instead of 'reduce the risk for themselves', the student could have said 'mitigate potential harm'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is largely accurate and the sentences are well-constructed. The minor grammatical error ('risks for themselves' instead of 'risks for them') is easily overlooked and does not detract significantly from the overall impression. Using a wider range of grammatical structures would further enhance the score.

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