Band 6+: Do you think that social media has made people more or less connected?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response addresses the question but could benefit from clearer and more developed explanations. Consider providing specific examples or elaborating on the reasons behind the decreased social interaction. Ensure that your points are directly linked to the impact of social media on local communities.

The answer is somewhat coherent but contains some hesitations and reformulations. The flow of ideas could be smoother. Try to organize your thoughts more clearly before speaking and use cohesive devices to link your ideas together more effectively. For example, use phrases like 'Furthermore,' 'In addition,' or 'Consequently' to connect your points.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. The phrase 'social interaction co-opiness' is unclear and not a natural expression. Expand your vocabulary related to technology and social interaction to express your ideas more accurately. For example, use words like 'diminished,' 'weakened,' or 'eroded' instead of 'reduces dramatically'.

The grammar contains errors that occasionally impede understanding. For example, 'we spent our majority of time' should be 'we spent the majority of our time.' Also, the sentence structure could be improved for clarity. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures and focus on accuracy in basic grammar. Review articles (a, an, the) and common verb tense errors.