Band 6+: Do you think that social media has made people more or less connected?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer addresses the question by discussing both connecting and dividing aspects of social media, which shows a balanced perspective. However, the response could be more general and less focused on specific examples like celebrities and income groups. To improve, consider discussing broader societal trends, such as echo chambers or global connectivity, and avoid concluding with a personal opinion about improvement. The answer is coherent but could be more fully developed with additional points or examples.

The answer is generally coherent and organized, with a clear introduction and a balanced view. However, there are some issues with cohesion and flow. The phrase 'With connecting side' is awkward and should be 'On the connecting side'. The transition 'But on the other hand' is used appropriately, but the sentence 'there is a tendency that maybe in social media has divided into two parts' is unclear and could be rephrased for better clarity. The conclusion 'So overall social media has improved people's life' is a bit abrupt and does not fully tie back to the question of connected vs. divided. To improve, use clearer signposting and ensure each point is fully developed.

The vocabulary is adequate but not highly precise or varied. Words like 'integrate', 'communicate', 'negotiate' are used appropriately, but there is repetition of 'communicate' and 'life'. The phrase 'luxury life' is acceptable but could be more precise, e.g., 'luxurious lifestyles'. The term 'dissatisfy' is used incorrectly; it should be 'be dissatisfied with'. To achieve a higher score, use more sophisticated and precise vocabulary, and avoid repetition.

The grammar is mostly accurate but with some errors. For example, 'With connecting side' should be 'On the connecting side'. 'there is a tendency that maybe in social media has divided' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'there is a tendency that social media has divided'. 'can dissatisfy it from their life' is incorrect; it should be 'can be dissatisfied with their life'. The sentence 'some low-income families or maybe other middle-income families' is a bit awkward. Overall, the range of structures is limited, with mostly simple and compound sentences. To improve, use more complex structures and ensure grammatical accuracy.