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Band 6+: Do you think the government should invest more money in concerts?

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Well, in my view, there are merits and demerits to concerts. Firstly, there are a lot of advantages because the government should spend more money on concerts as they help to encourage people and urge them to engage in something. In addition, they provide an escape from the hustle and bustle. However, there are several disadvantages. Firstly, concerts can lack funding, which can lead to a crisis, and they can also create a noisy and disorderly ambiance. At the same time, they can face a lot of problems.

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Well, in my view there are merits and demerits in the concert. Firstly, there are a lot of advantages because the government should spend more money in concert because they help to improve the encourage people to and urge something. In addition, they help their escape from hustle and bustle. However, there are several disadvantages. Firstly, concerts need to to lack little bit of money and pay it, it can lead to crisis and also they can become noisy and disorder ambience at the same time, they can be facing a lot of problems.

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