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Band 7+: Do you think the government should invest more money in concerts?

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In my opinion, during people's leisure time, concerts would be good alternatives for them. This is because concerts can motivate people in many ways. So yes, governments should invest more money in concerts to make them more appealing.

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In my opinion during people’s leisure time concerts would be good alternatives for them. This is because concerts can motivate people in many ways. So yes, governments should invest more money in concerts to make them more interesting for people.

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Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear opinion. However, it could benefit from further elaboration on the reasons why concerts are good alternatives and how they motivate people. Providing specific examples or discussing the broader benefits of government investment in concerts would strengthen the answer. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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The answer is generally coherent and easy to follow. The structure is simple but effective. To improve, try to elaborate more on each point and use a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly. For example, you could add specific examples or explain the 'many ways' concerts motivate people.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. The word 'interesting' is a bit generic. Using 'appealing' is a slight improvement. Try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to the topic of concerts and government investment. For example, instead of 'good alternatives,' you could say 'enriching recreational options' or 'valuable cultural experiences.'

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