Band 7+: does everyone have accesses to the internet in your country ?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is relevant to the question and demonstrates a good understanding of the topic. However, it could benefit from a more direct and explicit response to whether everyone has internet access, rather than focusing on device ownership. Consider adding a concluding sentence that directly addresses the question of universal internet access in Vietnam.

The answer is coherent and well-structured. The slight pause before "In addition" could be smoothed out for improved fluency. Consider adding a concluding sentence to summarize your point more effectively.

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly precise. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used to describe internet access (e.g., 'ubiquitous,' 'pervasive,' 'digital divide').

Grammar is accurate with a good range of structures. The comma splice in the final sentence could be improved by using a conjunction or restructuring the sentence. For example, you could say, "...those in rural areas, who are often considered to be limited by smart devices, are also starting to gain internet access."