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Band 5+: does everyone have accesses to the internet in your country ?

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Yes, of course everyone has access to the internet in my country. When a person buys it for a smartphone or an app, it can be used on the internet everywhere. It's also a comfortable and easy app for you to get internet access. In my opinion, families must be careful with teenagers or children who may become addicted to the internet, as it can be disadvantageous for them. Therefore, it is important to consider how to use the internet responsibly and what to do when searching for information.

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Yes, of course everyone have access to the internet in my country and when a person buy it for a smartphone or a app, it can be used on the internet for everywhere. And also it’s a comfortable and easy app for you to get internet. Of course in my opinion the family must be careful for teenagers or child that don’t have internet addictive for also disadvantage for their children or teenagers. And therefore it can be an important what to do usage which what to do for internet searching about that.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

internet: 5

access: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it focuses more on the use and potential problems of internet access rather than the accessibility itself. Consider directly addressing the question's scope by discussing the availability of internet infrastructure and potential barriers to access for different groups of people. Broaden the scope of the response to include a more nuanced perspective on internet access in your country.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is mostly coherent, but there are some minor issues with fluency. The speaker uses fillers like "of course" repeatedly. The ending is a bit muddled and could be more concise and clearly structured. Improving the flow and reducing repetition would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The speaker uses some slightly imprecise language (e.g., "buy it for a smartphone or an app"). More precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. Consider using synonyms and more descriptive language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ("everyone have access"), article usage, and sentence structure. The final sentence is particularly grammatically flawed. Focusing on accurate grammar and sentence construction is crucial for improvement. Review basic grammar rules and practice forming complex sentences.

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