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Band 6+: does everyone set a goal for themselves

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In my personal opinion, no. Because a large number of people set their goals for their parents. For instance, some people really want to buy new houses or cars for their parents. They can also desire to assist their family. Some people set their goals for their family, I think.

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Um, in my personal opinion, no. Because a, uh, large number of people said their or calls for their parents. For instance, some people really want to, uh, um, buy new houses, cars for their parents. And they can, uh. They can also desire to, uh, assist their family there. Uh, some people, uh, set their goals for their family, I think.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 6

people: 3

goals: 2

parents: 2

family: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some explanation. However, it mainly focuses on personal experiences and examples rather than discussing the question in a general sense. Consider broadening the scope of your response to include more general observations about goal-setting in society.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but there are noticeable hesitations and filler words like "um" and "uh." Improving fluency would involve reducing these and speaking more smoothly. The structure is somewhat disorganized; a clearer introduction and conclusion would enhance coherence. Try to plan your response briefly before speaking.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and range. Words like "assist" are good, but more specific and sophisticated vocabulary would elevate the response. Consider using synonyms and more descriptive language to express your ideas more effectively. For example, instead of 'assist their family,' you could say 'provide financial support for their family' or 'contribute to their family's well-being.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical inaccuracies and incomplete sentences. The sentence structure is quite simple. While the message is conveyed, more complex grammatical structures and accurate sentence construction would improve the score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct use of tenses. For example, the phrase 'some people really want to, uh, um, buy new houses, cars for their parents' could be improved to 'Some people aspire to buy their parents new houses and cars.'

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