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Band 6+: does everyone set a goal for themselves

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From my perspective, I think not everyone sets goals for themselves. They prefer to go with the flow. As life happens, they take it and accept it. But some people set goals for themselves. They become ambitious for their life and career, wanting to achieve everything they have desired since childhood.

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From my perspective, that I think everyone. Not everyone, sets their goal on themselves. They prefer to go with the flaw. Like as. As life happens, they take it and accept it. But some people. Some people set goals for themselves. They want to be. They become ambitious for their life, career, and want to be everything they want since their childhood.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

they: 4

goals: 2

themselves: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer adequately addresses the question by presenting both sides of the argument. Consider expanding on the reasons why some people might not set goals, and providing more specific examples to illustrate the different approaches to life. A more detailed exploration of the motivations behind goal-setting would further enhance the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the fluency could be improved. There are some hesitations and repetitions ("like as", "some people, some people"). A more concise and smoother delivery would enhance the score. Try to plan your response mentally before speaking to avoid such issues.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but some phrases could be more precise. Instead of "go with the flaw," using "go with the flow" is more natural. The phrase "want to be everything they want" is slightly awkward; a more sophisticated expression would improve the lexical range. Consider using synonyms and more precise vocabulary to enhance this aspect.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical inaccuracies. The sentence structure is sometimes clumsy. The phrase "that I think everyone" is grammatically incorrect. The use of the simple present tense is inconsistent. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure will significantly improve the score. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures correctly.

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