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Band 5+: give up old frinds

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There are a variety of reasons to give up old friends. First of all, people's lives have changed over time, and they move from one place to another. They have busy schedules and develop new interests. That's why they fancy a pet nowadays.

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There are a variety of reasons to give up old people, give up old friends. First of all people life has changed with time and they go to move one place to another place and then because they have a busy schedule and to develop a new interest when people that’s why they fancy a pet when nowadays

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

they: 3

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Pronunciation

5.5

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Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it lacks depth and comprehensive explanation. It touches upon reasons for drifting apart from friends but doesn't fully address the act of consciously giving up old friends. Consider exploring different perspectives and providing more detailed examples to support your points. The connection between changing lifestyles and getting a pet is weak and needs further elaboration or removal.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but lacks a smooth flow. There's some repetition and the ideas aren't fully developed. Work on connecting your ideas more smoothly and concisely. Practice speaking at a more natural pace.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and sophisticated. The phrase "give up old people" is incorrect; it should be "give up old friends." Try to use more varied and nuanced vocabulary to express your ideas.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar contains several errors, particularly in sentence structure and word order. The sentence "people that's why they fancy a pet when nowadays" is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Focus on improving sentence structure and accuracy. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures.

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