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Band 6+: How can a person become more confident?

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From my own perspective, a person who wants to become more confident needs to set their achievements or goals for the future to achieve that. However, they should not compete with each other because I believe that competition is a negative influence on their plans. When people set goals, they also need to develop their personal skills, and self-care is the first step.

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from my own perspective, a person who want to become more confident need to be set their achievement or their goals in the future to achieve that however, they should not compete with each other because I believe that competitive is a negative influence or impact with their plan when people set and it’s also they need to complete their personal skill or self-care is the first

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The answer is relevant to the question and provides some suggestions on building confidence. However, it is quite brief and lacks detailed explanation and examples. Consider expanding on each point, providing more specific strategies and illustrating them with clear examples. Focusing less on personal opinion and more on general approaches would also strengthen the response.

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Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'achievement' and 'competitive' are used correctly, but more precise and nuanced vocabulary could be employed to express ideas more effectively. Consider using synonyms and more descriptive language.

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Grammar contains several errors, particularly in sentence structure and word order. For example, 'a person who want to become more confident' should be 'a person who wants to become more confident'. The sentence 'when people set and it's also they need to complete their personal skill' is grammatically incorrect and needs restructuring. Focusing on accurate sentence construction and subject-verb agreement will improve the score.

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