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Band 7+: How can governments improve the education system?

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From my point of view, governments should focus on the education system and invest most of their finances in it, in order to increase the number of grants for talented students and also bolster professionalism among teachers, because they should know how to attract students and avoid neglecting their subjects. Thank you.

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From my point of view, governments should focus on the education system and invest most of their finances in that, in order to increase the number of grants for talented students and also bolster the professionality among the teachers, because they should know how to attract students and avoid neglecting their subjects. Thank you.

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students: 2

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some good suggestions. However, expanding on the suggestions with more detail and examples would strengthen the response. Consider exploring other areas of improvement, such as curriculum development or infrastructure improvements.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-structured. The ideas flow logically. Minor improvements could be made by adding a brief transition between the two main points (grants and teacher professionalism). The pacing is good, and there is no significant repetition or self-correction.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "bolster" and "professionalism" show a good range. However, more sophisticated vocabulary could be used to express the ideas more precisely. For example, instead of "avoid neglecting their subjects," a phrase like "maintain student engagement" could be used.

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The grammar is mostly accurate, with only a minor error ("professionality" instead of "professionalism"). The sentence structures are relatively simple but effective. Using more complex grammatical structures, such as subordinate clauses, would enhance the answer.

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