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Band 6+: How do children socialise with each other

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From my point of view, when children are in the age range of two to five years old, they don't know how to talk fluently. Therefore, they socialize with their friends by using nonverbal actions like sharing toys or playing together. As they develop, they often use more verbal communication to share, show, and make their communication more effective.

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From my point of view, when the casears of, uh, being the age, uh, range from two years old to five years old, they don’t know how to talk, uh, uh, fluently. Therefore, they socialize with the friends by using nonverrbal, nonverbal, uh, actions like sharing toys or playing togethers or playing together. When they developed, uh, they often use more verbal and verbal communication actions to share, to show, and to make the talk more u effectively.

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