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Band 6+: How do today's people keep healthy?

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How do today's people keep healthy? In my opinion, people today enjoy exercising, especially students and sportsmen, because exercising can help improve your health and physical strength. You can also improve your mental health by exercising every day, which helps you build consistency in your routine. So that's why exercise is important.

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How do today’s people keep healthy? In my opinion today people enjoy exercising, especially students or sportsmen, because exercising can help improve your health and also your physical strength too. So that’s why and also you can improve your mental health because you do exercise everyday and you can improve your consistency with doing exercise daily. So that’s why.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

exercising: 3

your: 3

people: 2

improve: 2

health: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The response addresses the question but could benefit from a broader range of ideas and more developed explanations. Consider exploring additional aspects of maintaining health beyond exercise, such as diet, mental well-being, and access to healthcare. Providing specific examples or elaborating on the benefits of each aspect would strengthen the answer.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there is noticeable repetition of phrases like "so that's why." Try to vary your connecting words and phrases to improve the flow and avoid sounding repetitive. Focus on developing your ideas more fully instead of relying on repetitive connectors.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The words used are common and don't demonstrate a wide range. To improve, try to incorporate more specific and descriptive vocabulary related to health and fitness. For example, instead of just saying 'improve your health,' you could say 'enhance cardiovascular health' or 'boost your immune system.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is generally accurate, but there are a few minor errors and simplifications. For example, "today people enjoy exercising" could be improved to "people today enjoy exercising." To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in more complex sentences. Pay attention to word order and article usage.

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