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Band 6+: How do you think the increasing lifespan of humans will impact society's resources and infrastructure?

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In my eyes, the increasing lifespan of humans will have a significant effect on social structures in the future because the government will have to spend a lot of money to support the people, particularly those who are retired. The result of this allocation will be excessive.

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In my eyes, increasing lifespan of humans will have a lot of effect on social structures in the future because the government have to spend a lot of money to their farewell to support the people, the under people who retired lives and the result of location is will be I used too much.

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The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. The phrase 'under people who retired lives' is not natural. Use more precise vocabulary to express your ideas more clearly. For example, instead of 'under people who retired lives,' you could say 'retired individuals' or 'the elderly population.' Also, 'farewell' is not the correct word; 'welfare' is more appropriate in this context.

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There are several grammatical errors in the response. For example, 'the government have to spend' should be 'the government has to spend.' Also, 'the result of location is will be I used too much' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Focus on using correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Practice constructing more complex sentences while ensuring they are grammatically accurate.

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