Band 7+: how do you travel to work or school from your home

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is well-organized and coherent, directly addressing the question. Consider expanding on the reasons behind your preference for the bus and providing more details about your walking commute to further enrich your response.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. However, there is a minor slip in fluency with the phrase "taking to bars." This suggests a slight hesitation or uncertainty in expression. Consider pausing briefly to gather your thoughts before speaking if you feel yourself losing your train of thought. Otherwise, the answer flows well.

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The phrase "modes of transportations" is slightly inaccurate; it should be "modes of transportation." The vocabulary is functional but could be enhanced with more precise and sophisticated language. For example, instead of "unwind," you could use a more descriptive word like "relax" or "de-stress."

There are some grammatical inaccuracies. The most significant error is "taking to bars" instead of "taking the bus." There is also a minor error in the use of "transportations." While the overall grammar is understandable, more attention to accuracy and a wider range of grammatical structures would improve the score. Practice using different sentence structures (complex and compound sentences) to demonstrate a wider range.