Band 7+: How has education changed compared to the past?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant points about the changes in education over time. The answer could be strengthened by providing more specific examples or elaborating on the impact of these changes.

The answer is generally coherent, but there are some minor hesitations and a slight lack of flow. The ideas are connected, but the transitions could be smoother. Try to use more varied cohesive devices to link your ideas together more effectively. For example, instead of just saying 'so,' you could use phrases like 'as a result' or 'consequently'.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. The word choice is generally appropriate, but there's room for improvement in using more sophisticated vocabulary related to education and technology. For example, instead of 'gadgets,' you could use 'technological tools' or 'digital devices.' Also, consider using synonyms for 'interactive' to showcase a wider range of vocabulary.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. For example, 'students started using the internet' could be improved to 'students use the internet.' Also, the sentence 'it changed it because our era is going to future' is a bit awkward and could be rephrased for better clarity and grammatical correctness. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures accurately to enhance your score.