Band 6+: How has the internet changed the way people spend their free time?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer stays on topic and addresses the question directly, discussing how the internet has changed leisure activities. It provides specific examples like social media, e-games, and virtual reality, which adds depth. However, the response could be more fully developed by exploring contrasting aspects, such as how the internet has both expanded and potentially narrowed free-time options, or by discussing broader societal trends rather than listing examples. To achieve a higher score, aim for a more balanced and general analysis, avoiding overly specific brand names like Facebook and instead focusing on categories of change.

The answer is coherent and addresses the question directly. However, it lacks cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly, and the structure is somewhat simplistic. To improve, use a range of linking words (e.g., 'for instance', 'moreover', 'as a result') and develop the answer with a clearer progression of ideas, such as contrasting past and present leisure activities.

The vocabulary is adequate and includes some relevant terms like 'widespread expansion', 'social media', 'AI-related search engines', and 'virtual reality'. However, there is limited range and precision; phrases like 'other amusing domains' are vague. To enhance, use more specific and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'immersive experiences', 'digital entertainment', 'online communities') and avoid repetition.

Grammar is mostly accurate with simple structures, but there are minor errors (e.g., 'with widespread expansion' should be 'with the widespread expansion', 'AI related' should be 'AI-related'). The answer lacks complex structures like conditionals or relative clauses. To improve, incorporate a mix of sentence types, such as 'While some people prefer...', and ensure consistent article use.