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Band 5+: How have changed your relation with your family since you were young?

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When I was young, I once arrived here angry because I was a teenager. I didn't know what I wanted for my future. At the moment, I'm more loving and understanding. Right now, I know what I want clearly because I am sensitive.

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When I was young, I once arrived here and angry because I was a teenager. I didn’t know what I wanted for my future. At the moment, I’m more loving and understated. Right now, I know what I want. I clearly because I am sensitive.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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because: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question but lacks detail and depth. It focuses more on personal feelings than on the evolution of the relationship with the family. Consider providing specific examples of how your relationship has changed over time and elaborate on the reasons behind these changes. A more comprehensive and detailed response would improve the overall quality.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but lacks a smooth flow. There are some abrupt transitions and the structure could be improved by using clearer linking words and phrases to connect ideas. Consider using more sophisticated sentence structures to enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the message is conveyed, using more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. Consider replacing words like "arrived here" with more descriptive phrases and using synonyms for words like "loving" and "understanding" to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors, such as the use of "clearly because." The sentence structure is sometimes awkward. Focus on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and subordinate clauses, to demonstrate grammatical control.

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