Band 5+: How many languages can you speak? [Why/Why not?]?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is understandable, but lacks detail and depth. Consider elaborating on your experiences learning each language, including challenges and successes. Focusing on a few languages in more detail would be more effective than listing many with minimal explanation.

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. The phrasing 'I'm going to speak 12 languages' is slightly unnatural; it would be better to say 'I can speak 12 languages' or 'I speak 12 languages'. The explanation for Japanese is unclear and could be more concise. The connection between being a 'gift student' and learning French needs more explanation. Better organization and clearer expression would improve fluency and coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate but not sophisticated. Words like 'died in it' (instead of 'dived into it') and 'gift student' (instead of 'gifted student') show a lack of precision. Using more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score.

There are several grammatical errors. 'I just died in it' is incorrect. The sentence structure is sometimes awkward, for example, 'French is my first year of high school'. The use of tenses is inconsistent. Improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures would significantly improve the score.