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Band 6+: How might globalization affect the diversity and uniqueness of local communities and cultures?

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From a broader perspective, globalization has an adverse effect on cultural heritage and local communities due to its impact on individuals' minds. It can completely change the way we communicate and also negatively affect communities. A prime example of this would be evidence of global nations and urban areas where opportunities arise. Wildlife and the environment will suffer the most damage. That's the main reason.

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From a broader perspective, globalisation has an adverse effect on cultural heritage and local communities due to its effects on individuals’ minds and it can completely change the way we communicate and also has an adverse effect on community. A prime example of this would be evidences of global nation as global nation and urban areas and opportunities arises. Wildlife and environment will take the biggest damage. That’s the main reason.

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The response addresses the impact of globalization on local communities and cultural identities but could benefit from more specific examples and a clearer structure. Expanding on the points made and providing concrete illustrations would strengthen the answer.

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