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Band 7+: How might the concept of 'community' evolve in an increasingly digital world?

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I strongly believe that the idea of community is evolving day by day in today's digital age. First of all, because of the technological innovations that boost connections among people, it is easier to create a group or a community with others. The increase in e-learning communities and digital platforms also enhances the concept of creating a group of people who can cooperate in the best way. If there weren't these upgraded and updated technologies in today's market, it wouldn't have been possible to communicate effectively.

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I strongly believe that the idea of community is evolving day by day in today’s digital age. First of all because of the technology innovation that boost connection amongst people and so it could be easier to create a group or a community with other people. The increasing of e-learning communities and the digital platform also enhance the concept of creating a group of people that will be able to cooperate in the best way. If there wasn’t this upgraded and updated technologies in today’s market, it wouldn’t have been possible to communicate in the best way.

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