Band 6+: How might the increasing reliance on social media impact the development of critical thinking skills among young people?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response touches on the topic but could benefit from a more comprehensive exploration of the potential impacts of technology on critical thinking skills. Providing specific examples and discussing both positive and negative aspects would strengthen the answer. Additionally, focusing on young adults rather than children would align the response more closely with the question.

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are some hesitations and reformulations that affect the flow. The organization of ideas could be improved with clearer transitions. Try to structure your answer more logically, perhaps by outlining the main points you want to make before you start speaking. Using cohesive devices more effectively would also help.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The phrase "build your horizon" is not entirely natural. To improve, try to use more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to technology and critical thinking. For example, instead of 'easy way,' you could say 'convenient method' or 'accessible tool.'

There are noticeable grammatical errors, such as incorrect verb forms ("increase the reliance on technology impact") and article usage. The sentence structure is also quite simple. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in basic grammar. Practice using complex sentences and varied verb tenses.