Band 6+: How might the increasing reliance on technology affect traditional craftsmanship?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response touches on the topic but lacks depth and specific examples. It could be improved by providing more concrete illustrations of how technology impacts art and craftsmanship, and by exploring both positive and negative effects.

The response is somewhat hesitant, with some pauses and self-correction ('where you are using technology'). The ideas are presented, but the connection between them could be clearer. Try to organize your thoughts more logically and use cohesive devices to link your ideas together more effectively. For example, you could use phrases like 'On the one hand...' and 'On the other hand...' to present contrasting viewpoints.

The vocabulary is quite basic and lacks precision. While the words used are generally appropriate, there's a lack of variety and sophistication. Try to incorporate more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to art, craftsmanship, and technology. For example, instead of 'affects a lot,' you could say 'significantly alters the nature of' or 'undermines the authenticity of'.

The grammar is generally understandable, but there are noticeable errors ('technology are less important,' 'person related'). The range of grammatical structures is limited. Focus on improving subject-verb agreement and using a wider variety of sentence structures. For example, try incorporating conditional sentences or relative clauses to express more complex ideas.