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Band 7+: How might the increasing reliance on technology affect traditional craftsmanship?

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So to start, I would probably say that art, for me, is something that is made by humans as a definition. The main point of it is to express yourself without words and to put your soul into it, which technology eventually doesn't have. I think relying on technology can improve the level of art and craftsmanship, but it takes the soul out of it and makes it just a picture, not a form of art.

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So to start I would probably say that art for me is something that is made by human as a definition. The main point of it is to express yourself without words and to put your soul into it, which technologies eventually don’t have. And I think relying on the technologies can improve the level of art and craftsmanship, but it takes the soul out of it and makes it just a picture, not a form of art.

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The response addresses the question by discussing the impact of technology on art and craftsmanship, particularly focusing on the loss of soul and personal expression. To improve, consider providing more specific examples of how technology affects different art forms and craftsmanship. Additionally, exploring both positive and negative impacts in more detail would enhance the response.

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The vocabulary is adequate for discussing the topic, with words like 'express yourself,' 'soul,' and 'craftsmanship' being used appropriately. To improve, try to incorporate more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to art and technology. For example, instead of 'improve the level of art,' you could say 'enhance the precision of artistic techniques' or 'expand the possibilities for creative expression.'

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