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Band 6+: How might the increasing reliance on technology impact the development of interpersonal skills in young adults?

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Yes, technology is very essential in modern life. Wherever you go, technology is important and has many uses. In the future, technology will be even more advanced. Technology has a great impact on interpersonal skills, depending on what kind of skills you want to learn. Through technology, you can learn various skills, such as cybersecurity and how to become a great trader. With the help of technology, especially for Indian children, they can use YouTube for studying and also ChatGPT, which is useful for learning. However, there are also side effects, such as with ChatGPT, because young children may not think critically; they simply ask a question and receive an answer. This can be a side effect, in my opinion.

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Yes, technology is very essential for today in modern life and because technology, wherever you go, technology is very essential and it’s a lot of uses and maybe in the future, the technology is more advanced. So technology has a great impact on interpersonal scale like what kind of scale do you want to learn. So technology in the way of technology you will learn every kind of scale like cyber security and how to become a great trader. So with the help of technology you will learn about the scale and especially Indian children they can also use the YouTube for the study and also the ChedGPT it is useful for the study. Also, they have a lot of side effects, such as the Chgpd because young people, children are not thinking about in mind, they only give a question and Chgpd gave him. So it is a side effect in my opinion.

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