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Band 6+: How might urbanization affect social interactions and community bonds?

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Urbanization has a big impact on social interaction in modern societies because people who move to the city encounter new rules, better facilities, and improved education. In urban areas, people have better communication, which increases social interaction.

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Urbanization gives a big impact for social interaction in modern societies because people that go to the city, they have a new ruler and they have good facilities and also education. So, who people are there? Urbanization, they have a good communication and then it’s increasing to social interaction.

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