Band 5+: How the internet, messaging apps, and social platforms have changed the way people interact and form relationships.

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the general topic of technological advancement and its impact on socializing, but it fails to directly answer the specific question regarding how the internet, messaging apps, and social platforms have changed interactions and relationships. The answer remains overly abstract and does not provide specific examples or details related to the tools mentioned in the prompt. To improve, try to address the specific components of the question (e.g., how messaging apps make communication faster or how social media affects the depth of friendships) and provide more concrete explanations to support your viewpoint.

The answer is very brief and lacks development. While the ideas are connected, you failed to address the specific components of the question (internet, messaging apps, and social platforms). To improve, you need to expand your answer using the 'Answer + Reason + Example' structure. A Band 9 answer would explore *how* these specific tools change interactions, rather than just stating a general opinion.

You used some good words like 'advancement' and 'innovation,' but the vocabulary is quite limited and repetitive. Phrases like 'killed our perspective' are slightly unnatural in this context; 'diminished our ability to socialize' or 'transformed our social dynamics' would be more precise. Try to use more topic-specific vocabulary related to technology and communication (e.g., digital connectivity, virtual interactions, face-to-face contact).

The grammar is mostly accurate, but the sentence structures are very simple and repetitive (Subject + Verb + Object). To reach a higher band, you need to use complex sentence structures, such as conditional sentences ('If we rely too much on apps, we might lose...') or relative clauses ('Technology, which has advanced rapidly, has...'). Your use of 'it doesn't have beneficial points' is grammatically correct but stylistically weak.