Band 6+: In what ways can governments encourage sustainable urban development and reduce urban sprawl?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response addresses the question but could benefit from more specific examples and a clearer focus on sustainable living. While cleanliness and addressing social issues are important, linking them more directly to environmental sustainability would strengthen the answer. Consider providing concrete policy suggestions or elaborating on the environmental impact of the mentioned issues.

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are some instances of repetition and a lack of clear connectors between ideas. To improve, focus on using a wider range of cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'in addition,' 'consequently') to link your points more smoothly. Also, try to avoid repeating phrases like 'in my opinion' too frequently.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. While the words used are generally appropriate, the answer would benefit from more sophisticated vocabulary related to sustainability and urban development. For example, instead of 'make urban areas more clean,' consider using 'enhance urban sanitation' or 'improve environmental quality.' Also, 'narcomans' is not a common or precise term; 'drug users' is better, or even more specific terms depending on the context.

The grammar is generally understandable, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, 'making them feel more uncomfortable' is unclear in its reference. Pay attention to pronoun references and ensure they are clear. Also, work on using a wider range of grammatical structures to express your ideas more effectively. For instance, try using conditional sentences or more complex sentence structures.