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Band 6+: In your opinion, what measures can be taken to promote greater understanding and tolerance between different cultures?

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Wow, that is a tough question, and I have never gotten that question before, so let me think for a second. Okay, so in my country, Indonesia, thankfully, although we have lots of differences in our community, which includes religions, tribes, and ethnicities, we can still be very nice to each other and very respectful. I think one of the reasons it can be that way is because we have a bond with each other; we experience the same pain from what happened to our ancestors. There are also some regulations that protect us from anything that can harm us.

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Wow, that is a tough question and I never got that question before so let me think for a second. Okay, so in my country Indonesia, thankfully, Although we have lots of differences in our community, which includes religions, tribes, and also ethnics, we can still be very nice to each other, very respectful to each other. And I think one of the reasons why it can be that way is because we have a sort of bond with each other because we experience the same pain from the that happen to our ancestors and there are also some regulation that Protects us from any Things that can harm us

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Task Response

The response touches on the topic but relies heavily on a personal example from Indonesia, which limits its general applicability to the globalized world. To improve, consider discussing broader strategies such as educational programs, media campaigns, or international collaborations that can foster cultural understanding and tolerance on a global scale.

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The response includes some hesitation and filler phrases ('Wow, that is a tough question and I never got that question before so let me think for a second. Okay, so'). While the ideas are generally coherent, the organization could be improved by directly addressing the question of promoting cultural understanding and tolerance in a globalized world, rather than focusing solely on the Indonesian context. To improve, try to directly answer the question first and then provide specific examples or experiences.

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The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'nice' and 'respectful' are basic. To enhance the lexical resource, try to incorporate more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to cultural understanding, tolerance, and globalization. For example, instead of 'nice,' consider using words like 'harmonious' or 'cordial.' Instead of 'respectful,' try 'appreciative' or 'considerate.'

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