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Band 7+: Is advertising really necessary in modern society?

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I agree that advertising is necessary in modern society for several reasons. First, it encourages the development of trade and the economy of a country. Having many buyers means that many products are sold not only domestically but also exported abroad, helping the national economy to grow. Furthermore, advertising also promotes technological development. The need to constantly change the form of advertising to diversify marketing strategies will help technology develop as well.

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I agree that advertising is necessary in modern society for some reasons. First, this encourages the development of trade and the economy of a country. Having many buyers means that many products are sold not only domestically but also exported abroad. Helping the national economy to develop. Furthermore, advertising also promotes technological development. The need to constantly change the form of advertising to diversify marketing strategy will help technology develop together.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

advertising: 3

development: 2

economy: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is well-organized and coherent, directly addressing the question. Consider expanding on the points made by providing specific examples to illustrate the impact of advertising on trade, the economy, and technological development. Exploring potential drawbacks or counterarguments could further strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is well-structured and coherent, with a clear introduction and two supporting points. The ideas flow logically. Minor improvements could be made by adding smoother transitions between sentences and ideas. For example, instead of 'Furthermore, advertising also promotes...', a more sophisticated transition like 'Moreover, the advertising industry itself acts as a catalyst for...' could be used.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and mostly accurate. Words like "encourages," "domestically," and "exported" show a good range. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could elevate the response. For example, instead of 'Helping the national economy to develop,' consider 'contributing significantly to national economic growth'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is largely accurate with only minor imperfections. Sentence structures are varied and mostly complex. The use of 'Having many buyers means that many products are sold...' could be improved by using a more concise and sophisticated structure. For example, 'A high volume of buyers ensures robust domestic and international sales...' would be more impactful.

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