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Band 8+: Is it good to reward children too often? Why?

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No, I don't think children should be rewarded too often. If they always receive rewards, they may start doing things just for the prize instead of understanding why it is right or wrong. Over time, this can reduce their internal motivation. However, additional rewards can be helpful to encourage good behavior and show appreciation for their efforts.

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No, I don’t think children should be rewarded too often. If they always get rewards, they may start doing things just for the price instead of understanding why it is right or wrong. Over time, this can reduce that internal motivation. However, additional rewards can be helpful to encourage good behavior and show appreciation for their efforts.

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