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Band 6+: Learning second language must be mandotry at school

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Requiring students to learn a foreign language in schools is a topic with strong arguments on both sides. While there are some positive aspects, there are also concerns that should be taken into account. On the positive side, learning a foreign language enhances cognitive skills like memorization and problem-solving. Research shows that bilingual individuals tend to have better focus and mental flexibility. Furthermore, studying a second language enhances cultural awareness, reducing cultural misunderstandings and culture shock. When it comes to career prospects, in today's world, many companies value employees who can speak a foreign language.

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Reclining students to learn a foreign language at schools is a topic with strong arguments on both sides. While there are some positive sides of it, there are some concerns that should be taken into account. From the positive side, learning a foreign language enhances cognitive skills like memorizing, problem solving skills, etc. There are some research that show bilingual individuals tend to have better focus and mental flexibility. Furthermore, studying a second language enhances cultural awareness, reducing cultural misunderstandings and culture shocks. When it comes to career perspectives, in today’s world there are so many companies that are not in the best position to learn a foreign language.

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The response adequately addresses the prompt by presenting arguments for and against the mandatory learning of a second language. To improve, consider exploring potential drawbacks of mandatory language learning, such as the strain on school resources and curriculum, and the potential for negative experiences that could discourage students. A more balanced discussion of both sides would strengthen the response.

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The answer is coherent and well-organized, presenting arguments from both sides. However, the fluency could be improved by reducing the number of pauses and fillers. The conclusion is somewhat abrupt and could be strengthened by summarizing the main points and offering a more definitive opinion.

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The vocabulary used is mostly appropriate and accurate, although some words could be more precise. For example, 'Reclining students' is not quite right; 'Requiring students' would be better. The range of vocabulary is good, but more sophisticated vocabulary could be used to enhance the answer.

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There are some grammatical errors, such as 'There are some research that show...' which should be 'Research shows...' or 'Some research shows...'. The sentence structure is generally correct, but some sentences are a bit long and complex. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure would significantly improve the overall score.

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