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Band 6+: On what occasions should children be encouraged?how?

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Well, I think it's always important to encourage children when they face challenges, whether it's at school with difficult homework or exams, or when they're involved in sports. It's great to support their team. It's also a good idea to give them encouragement when they do good things, like helping friends or doing chores at home. These are all great opportunities to show them that you believe in them and that you're proud of their efforts.

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Well, I guess, um, it’s always nice to encourage them when they find difficulties either, uh, at school with difficult homeworks or difficult exams, or when they’re doing sports. Tol was nice to support their team. Um, and was also a good idea to, uh, give them endorsement when they do, uh, goods, such as helping friends or doing, uh, chores at home and that type of thing.

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