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Band 5+: Should children not be allowed to make noise under any circumstances?

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Children just need to do different things at any stage of their life. It depends on the situation, and the situations of children are different from those of other people. Parents should allow children to make sounds or do different things because some situations are important for their growth. If they are not allowed to express themselves, after growing up, they may struggle in those situations. Every child has their own steps in life.

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Children just need to do different things in any stage of their life. It depends on the situation and the situation of the children are different than the other kinds of the people. If the parents should be allowed any different making sounds or to do different things about because just some situations are important for growing up. If they should not allow any different things and after growing up, they need to do in that situation because just every children have own steps of their life.

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